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12 Comments

  1. 1 Anjali
    July 12th, 2009 at 11:56 pm

    Namaskar,

    Absolutely Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this. I hope to share it with educators once you publish it:)

  2. 2 Kamala
    July 13th, 2009 at 8:04 am

    Beautiful!! I will pass this on to the AM River School kindy teacher, and read it to my children. thank you!

  3. 3 Amitabh
    July 13th, 2009 at 9:04 am

    What a beautiful story! You are very gifted, I look forward to more.

  4. 4 karun kumarji
    July 13th, 2009 at 9:31 am

    Beautiful Roshnii-ji,
    I sit with tears in my eyes.

  5. 5 Margaret and Gerry
    July 13th, 2009 at 10:19 am

    A beautiful, thoughtful poem.
    Well done.

  6. 6 Joost
    July 13th, 2009 at 11:59 am

    Very beautiful. For children and adults! It explains many spiritual (NH) ideas in a light, touching and convincing way. As a poem it is even more powerful than as a story, thanks to the rhythm and rhyme. Your drawings also contribute much.
    I wish my children would understand enough English to appreciate it.

    I hope you make many more poems.

    Joost

  7. 7 Vina
    July 13th, 2009 at 3:17 pm

    Beautiful and very well written. I’ve been looking for stories like this to help teach Baba’s teachings to my child. I hope you will write more.

  8. 8 Chandni
    July 14th, 2009 at 3:24 pm

    Dear Roshni, I really liked your story and the way you made it rhyme. I think it is spiritual and creative. Your pictures and words are great; they make me feel peaceful. I like that you are teaching to be kind to all things. I loved the idea of the singing star. It would be nice if everybody could learn the star song! I think this story could change people’s lives.
    Chandni (11 years old)

  9. 9 Amba
    July 14th, 2009 at 7:50 pm

    Namaskar,
    Thank you! It’s beautiful. Are those the drawings you will be using?
    His
    Amba

  10. 10 Didi Anandarama
    July 15th, 2009 at 9:25 pm

    Namaskar

    Very good! I like the rhyming lines. It is easy to read for kids who can read. Simple clear language. I hope you make it a nice book for publishing and include your illustrations which are also very nice. Start make your series. Figure out the size, and pages and style and look for a publisher … Hope you have time with you baby around:) but then Baba always helps when an idea is ripe.

    Our AMPublication unfortunately still not efficient yet to reach many outside. So try first outside but in any case we can do within AMP in a limited way.

  11. 11 Morgan
    July 21st, 2009 at 6:15 pm

    Beautiful! Brought a tear to the eye ;) and a warm feeling in the heart. I love the drawings too. I’m sure it will find an audience…

  12. 12 Mahesh
    August 24th, 2009 at 11:39 pm

    Namaskar !

    For me, it seems perfect.

    I think all previous comments already explained why.

    I live in Brazil, where we use portuguese language.

    But I will start by sharing this very nice story with my parents.

    Namaskar!
    Mahesh

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